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Prośba o sprawdzenie krótkiego tekstu - Angielskie
Witam mam prośbę mógł by ktoś rzucić okiem na ten tekst i zobaczyć czy nie ma w nim błędów?
Today I want tell something about challenge interesting for me. This challenge is about hiking to the Kilimandzaro. This mountain is highest in Afrika and the 4th on the world. I decide for this challenge because I like so much travelling and walking only with myself. I think that is only a dream because this hike will be so expensive and I think that my girlfriend will be not happy when I will be there because there are a lot of dangerous wild game. I think that a wild game is not a once of problem there. There must be so cold .I think 2 or 3 degrease but with strong cold wind feeling temperature will be -10 degrees. There can be also a dangerous pressure. I wanted to go there and see amanzing view from snow-capped peaks maybe in future maybe in next life. I don't but I know one. That challenge is for me.
M'q [ Schattenjäger ]
i want tell - i want to tell you
interesting for me - that i'm interested in
is highest - is the highest
i like so much travelling - i like traveling a lot
so expensive - too expensive
not a once of problem - not the only problem
i think 2 or 3 - i thing there will be 2 or 3
that challenge - this challenge
Tak na szybko, byc moze tez sie gdzies pomylilem, wiec niech ktos inny jeszcze to sprawdzi :)
ALICEssi [ Junior ]
I want to tell about the challenge that I'm interested in. It's about conquering the Kilimandzaro Mountain. It's the highest mount in Africa and the fourth one in the world.I've decided for this challenge because I love travelling and walking on my own. I think this dream will never come true because the expedition is very expensive. My girlfriend also will not be happy considering all dangers I may find there. Wilderness is not the only problem-it must be really cold there. There can be 2 or 3 degrees but thinking about strong wind, it will be about 10 degrees below zero. Pressure is another thing. I just wanted to go there and see amazing views from snow-capped peaks. Maybe I'll be able to do it in future or mnext life...who knows. I know one thing- this challenge is the best for me!
To by było na tyle:)
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