Gorąca prośba o sprawdzenie listu po angielsku. [bardzo krótki - 80 słówek]

26.06.2009

14:10

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Hestur [ Centurion ]

Gorąca prośba o sprawdzenie listu po angielsku. [bardzo krótki - 80 słówek]

Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last mail. Did you go to this concert in the end. How was it? I'm upset that i couldn't go.
Anyway, I'm writing to tell you about my holiday in Spain. I am having a great time. It is very warm and sunny every day. All people are very kind and food is brilliant. My all family is going together to the beach every day.
I have to end now because I promise my mother to do the shopping. I will send you some photos of the seaside.


Jest to na dodatkowy angielski, sprawa niby banalna, ale mogę mieć maksymalnie 4 błędy.

Pozdrawiam.

26.06.2009

14:14

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Ronnie Soak [ Lollygagger ]

My all family is going together to the beach every day - to jest troche nieciekawe, jakos moznaby to przerobic. we go to the beach every day? - nie tak opisowe ale przynajmniej brzmi dobrze

because I promised


poza tym spoko

edit:

[bez all]people are very kind and the food is brilliant