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Ziomeku [ Junior ]
Dobrze napisałem?- angielski
My dreams room is violet. My carpet is blue. Window is big. Curtains are yellow. My window there is in the wall. My bed there is in front of the windows. Next to the bed there is wastebin. Opposite the bed there is TV. On the right the TV there is computer. On the left there is a wardrobe. On the wardrobe there are a flower and my video games.On the shelf there are some books. Opposite the wardrobe there is a table. Next to the table there is a chair.
Z angielskiego jestem laikiem.
Maciuś Dżamal [ Chor��y ]
szału ni ma !
EG2006_43107114 [ Senator ]
Nie licząc błędów, to strasznie mało urozmaicone: "Tu jest. Tu jest tamto." itd. Napisz to jeszcze raz, pododawaj jakieś zamienniki do tych zwrotów, staraj się unikać powtórzeń.
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
[3]---> Gdybym miał opisać pokój byłoby prościej ale ja mam napisać co gdzie jest.
MacGawron [ OPC ]
Wg mnie tragedia nawet jak na postawowke.
Tomcio_666 [ Płatki Addicted ]
Tragicznie wręcz.
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
Inna wersja.
My dreams room is violet. My carpet is blue. Window is big. Curtains are yellow. My bed is on the middle. On the walls there are photos of my family. Next to the bed there is a table. My books and video games are on the shelves. Behind the door on the left there is a big window and my chair. I have computer, console, big TV. Cleans up every day here. In the wardrobe there is dresses. I love my all things.
yasiu [ Legend ]
co to jest dreams room?
użyj kilku przecinków i spójników :)
Łysy Samson [ Bass operator ]
Która klasa?
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
Kolejna wersja:
My dreams room is violet. My carpet is blue. Window is big. Curtains are yellow. My bed is on the middle, next to there is a table. On the walls there are photos of my family and postcard. My books and video games are on the shelves, the shelves are on the wall on the right. I have much books and games! Behind the door on the left there is a big window and my chair. I have computer, console, big TV. Cleans up every day here. In my room is the heat and nice. I love my things.
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
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MacGawron [ OPC ]
The room of my dreams is...
Przed rzeczownikami stawiaj "a"
Np. A window is big... lub the window is big.
My bed is in the middle. There are photos of my family on the walls.
I have many books nie much.
I clean it up everyday.
It's warm in my room.
Reszta jakos przejdzie.
axel1 [ LaCroix ]
Takie coś pisałem jak miałem 7 lat.
SanthiX [ Have a nice day ]
Room of my dreams, cup of coffee.
ale:
Sam's room, Ziomeku's thread.
Czujesz różnicę?
bodzio helikopter [ Konsul ]
Że tak się wyrażę.. troszeczkę infantylne.
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
Kurdę ale ja inaczej o moim wymarzonym pokoju nie umiem napisać. Nauczycielka chciała żebym opisał co gdzie jest. Więc ja zacząłem opisywać na podstawie przykładu, który podała.
Mortan [ ]
My perfect room, would be typical for most of teenagers in my age. It would be a quite big room, with large window in the centre of wall and bed under window, with violet paint on all 4 walls. Also i want to have, a blue carpet and yellow curtains in my room. Near bed i want to have a wastebin and o the oposite side of bed, a 42 inches plazma screen tv, with cable porn channels. Next to the tv, will be my new computer, and on the other side i wanna have a wardrobe. One of walls in room wold be full of books and videogames placed in large bookcase. I love my room, and porn channel, so i wank every day.
tak na szybko ;)
Ziomeku [ Junior ]
[17]---> Porn channel to kanały edukacyjne, tak?
[19]----> ;P O anatomii człowieka się rozumie?
Mortan [ ]
dokladnie