$Respect$ [ chłopak z pokoju 309 ]
Krótkie przemówienie z angielskiego, prosba o sprawdzenie.
Może mi ktos sprawdzić ten tekst pod wzgledem gramatycznym.
I would like to talk about ways of learning, which give results.
At the beginning, lerning time. We mustn't sit over books a few hours, because it's definitely too much, but we can't learn 15 minutes, because it is not enough. Statistically 2 hours of education in focus with 1 hour to homework is perfect time.
Secondly. Ways of lerning. Reading student book all time is The loss of time. We should read subject once, and take simple and easy notes. Next to we should learn from this notes. When we write notes, we memorize more, than when we reading.
Third. Position of lerning. We can't lern, when we lie, because we become sleepy. the best way is the chair and desk
Finally. When we lerning we shouldn't listening music or do something, that can distracting us. We can listen music, when we doing homework.
In conclusion, 3 hours for education in home make wonders. We are really prepared to go to school. Some sacrifice and effect will be visible.
$Respect$ [ chłopak z pokoju 309 ]
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pooh_5 [ Czyste Rączki ]
mustn't -> zmien na dont need to, reszty nie chce mi sie czytac ;P
$Respect$ [ chłopak z pokoju 309 ]
ok dzięki
bebz00n [ Centurion ]
lerning = learning - na resztę mam za dużą fazę
Biff [ ]
When we learn we shouldn't listen to music or do anything, that can distract us. We can listen to music, when we do homework.
Tak to zdanie jest poprawnie wg mnie.
iNfiNity! [ NSX ]
W zdaniu wyżej nie powinno być przecinków.