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blee_991 [ Generaďż˝ ]
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Dear Bartek
I’m Whiting to ask if you’d like to join Adam, Marcin, me and Tomek for trip on Monday 13th.
It’s going to be loads of fun!
I thing that we can meet up in my house at about 8 p.m. on Sunday evening. My father can drive us down to Amber Baltic Hotel in Międzyzdroje. We’ll stay in this hotel to Tuesday next week.
We want to get up early because we are going to go swimming. In evening we are going to go to the cinema.
As far as I know, the only thing you need to bring is a camera radio and some clothes.
As for cost, my mother says it’ll be about 50$ for the hotel, and about 5$ for cinema ticket. We are going to eat at the restaurant so you need more or less 20$. Hope that’s OK for you.
Anyway, can you call me and let me know if you can come?
Hope to see you very soon.
Lots of love
Maciek
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blee_991 [ Generaďż˝ ]
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wysiak [ Senator ]
"I’m Whiting to ask"
?
"We’ll stay in this hotel to Tuesday next week"
Until/till Tuesday.
I nie wiem co to jest 'camera radio'. Ale pewnie mial tam byc przecinek..
Reszta technicznie w miare ok, troszke na poziomie 'miec byc', ale zrozumiale. Jak jej sie podobasz, to ubytki gramatyczne wybaczy. Gorzej moze byc z tym wyliczaniem kosztow do $20..
Gromb [ P12 ]
Dear Bartek
I’m writing to ask you whether would you like to join to Adam, Marcin, Tomek me and me for trip on Monday 13th.
It’s going to be lots of fun!
I thing that we can meet in my house at about 8 p.m. on Sunday evening. My father could drive us down to Amber Baltic Hotel in Międzyzdroje. We’ll stay in this hotel till Tuesday next week.
We want to get up early because we are going to go swimming. In evening we are going to go to the cinema.
As far as I know, the only thing you need to bring is a camera radio and some clothes.
As for cost, my mother says it’ll be about 50$ for the hotel, and about 5$ for cinema ticket. We are going to eat at the restaurant so you need more or less 20$. Hope that’s OK for you.
Anyway, could you call me and let me know if you can come?
Hope to see you very soon.
with love,
Maciek
Na szybko, pierwszym rzutem. Ale zmieniłbym jeszcze kilka konstrukcji.
Cloud(pl) [ Ultimate Life Form ]
Gromb napisał: Marcin, Tomek me and me for....
Sugeruje napisać : Adam, Marcin, Tomek and me ... :D
THING >> powinno byc THINK
Sądzę że lepiej napisać zamiast drive us down >> take us to
Wydaje mi się że drive us down jest źle:P
In THE evening > szczegół:P