Moje ulubione miejsce z dzieciństwa

nieznosny18 [ Junior ]

Moje ulubione miejsce z dzieciństwa

witam. czy moglibyscie mi sprawdzic i ewentualnie poprawic moje bledy w opisie miejsca z angielskiego? ostrzegam, ze moj angielski troche kuleje. Z gory dziekuje.

When I was a child I had many favorite places. But the one, which I liked the best, is an ice-rink. When it was opened I spend there almost all my free time with my friends and parents.
This special place is situated in the gorgeous park. The nearest street was very calm and parents, who let their children go, didn’t have any worries about them. The park was always very clean and people took care about it.
An ice-rink was opened only in winter, so when you were going there, you had many opportunities to have fun and play with a snowball with other children. This place is special for a number of reasons. One of them is an atmosphere which I could feel there. People were doing complicated things such as double, triple or even quadruple jump. I felt there like a small figure skater, because people were looking at me with disbelief that a small child could skate so well. I remember that one day there were only few people and a professional couple. They were dancing on the ice without any problems. The man did overhead lifts and step sequences. I was so enchanted that I could not take my eyes off them. I had a chance to see them only once, but it is unforgettable for me.
I am not a child now, but I am still going to the ice-rink. When I see small children there my memories bring back and I remember my first steps on ice. I believe that I won’t forget about it to the rest of my life.