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kasiaa_a [ Legionista ]
Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu (język angielski)
Czy mogłabym prosić Was o sprawdzenie poniższego tekstu?? Chodzi mi o poprawność językową.
Jest to dla mnie baaaardzo ważne :) I z góry dziękuję!
My boyfriend is name Kamil. He has 18 years old. He's very tall and muscular. Kamil has bright carnation. He has a small scar an his chin. He has oblong face. My boyfriend has small nose. His lips are big and pretty. Eyes has big, green and glassy. He has short, dark hair. He's dress normal, usually in dark clothes. He's handsome and he very like me.
Pozdrawiam serdecznie :)
raz0r [ Chor��y ]
Na początek "My boyfriend's name is Kamil", potem "He IS 18..." i wg. mnie zamiast "has" powinno być "have". Reszta chyba ok.
I Love Her [ Centurion ]
sztywne że przez oczy nie przechodzi.
Imho takie błędy:
He's dress normal, usually in dark clothes.
He's dressing...
póki co nie widze innego. Ale przemknął mi się jeszcze jeden gdzieś.
Bajt [ Ariakan ]
My boyfriend's name is Kamil. He is 18 years old. He's very tall and muscular. Kamil has bright complexion. He has a small scar on his chin. He has an oblong face. My boyfriend has a small nose. His lips are big and pretty. His eyes are big, green and glassy. He has short dark hair. He dresses normally (casually chyba lepiej), usually dark clothes. He's handsome and he likes me very much / he is very much like me. (co masz na mysli w tym zdaniu? ze bardzo Cie lubi czy jest podobny do Ciebie?)
Gromb [ P12 ]
cokolwiek miał na myśli very much bardziej pasuje na końcu zdania jako dopełnienie.