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Prosze o sprawdzenie tekstu z angielskiego

28.04.2008
20:57
[1]

robal [ Konsul ]

Prosze o sprawdzenie tekstu z angielskiego

Proszę o sprawdzenie tego tekstu. Z góry dziękuję !

Egypt is a true paradise for tourists.
It guarantees splendid memories for those, who want to rest actively and for those, who long to rest passively on the beach.
You can get to know interesting culture and monuments.
You can also see the pyramids in Giza, a monumental temple in Abu Simbel or Luxor, which is rich in ancient buildings.
Cairo is the capital of Egypt.
There is a very good complex hotel and gastronomy base in Egypt.
You can come across both luxurious objects and charming small hotels, which are located somewhat off the beaten track.
The golden beaches of the Mediterranean Sea and the Red Sea belong to the most beautiful ones in the world.
Egypt is doubtlessly the country of adventure.
Great areas of desert are varied with green oases, a colourful underwater world, and the tombs, which are full of labyrinths, encourage us to discover this country.
When we think about Egypt pharaohs, monumental pyramids, beautiful beaches as well as the powerful Nile mostly appear before our eyes.
Egypt has the fascinating and well-known past.
Tourists can say more about ancient Egypt than about modern one.
Egypt is one of the most willingly visited countries in the world.

28.04.2008
21:00
[2]

provos [ Clandestino ]

Zamiast oases powinno być oasises.
Ogólnie to drewniane strasznie, ale błędów specjalnie nie ma.

Zamiast "powerful" napisałbym np. "mighty"

28.04.2008
21:09
[3]

azarothen [ wierdo ]

Liczba mnoga od oasis (oaza) to oases, wiec dobrze bylo.

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