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Hi Tommy
I'm writing this email from United Arab Emirates. This country is very young. Cities on coast are very modern and resemble the modernest European cities.There are many the scytrapers. People are very nice and hot. I thought that they are other but appearances are misleading.
The weather is very warm and dry. Sun always shining. Right that I live in the hotel with conditioning and I've got clear, azure and cool(in relation to air temperature) sea next to hotel.
Yesterday I'v been in Dubai on the Formula 1 – track with my parents. This has been very exciting. After we've gone in the city. We have seen very modern and high buildings.
Two after days we’ve been on the very interesant island which has got a palm shape. We have swum in the Arabian Sea.
I think that this country is fantastic! There is hot, sunny, hot sea and nice people.
Tonight we’re staying in our hotel. After we going to go to airport and to fly to Poland.
I hope you’re return to me.
Robert
polak111 [ T42 ]
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There are many the scytrapers. - bez 'the', skyscrapers
People are very nice and hot - na pewno chodzilo Ci o 'hot'? :-)
I thought that they are other but appearances are misleading - I thought (that) they would be other but appearances are deceptive (moim zdaniem bardziej pasuje)
Sun always shining - Sun is always shining albo sun always shine.
Yesterday I'v been in Dubai on the Formula 1 – track with my parents. This has been very exciting. Afterwards we've gone to the city - tutaj uzyj past simple.
Right (?) that I live in hotel with conditioning and I've got clear, azure and cool(in relation to air temperature) sea next to the hotel. - I live in a air-conditioned hotel albo hotel with air-conditioning
Two after days we’ve been on the very interesant island which has got a palm shape - we were... which is palm-shaped
There is hot, sunny, hot sea and nice people - bez przecinkow
After we going to go to airport and to fly to Poland. - Later we're going to airport to fly to Poland.
I hope you’re return to me. - Mam nadzieje, ze do mnie wrocisz? Standardowe zakonczenie listu to np. Love, xyz; Best wishes, xyz etc.
Mam nadzieje, ze nie zrobilem jakis powazych bledow.