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Adamek22 [ Dr Onan ]

Angielski.. sprawdzcie

The best day of my life was the 10th of April. This was uncommon day. I was at home. This day began as usual. .The sun was shining, birds were singing I wake up about 10 o'clock. I went to kitchen And I ate breakfest . The phone suddenly rang. I took telepone and heard my father's voice. He said that have surprise for me but I must wait to evening. I was very exited. In the evening my father arrived to home Through the window I saw green van. I thought that this surprise must be very big. I ran before house . In the green van was red motorbike. This was my largest dream. Mark's motorbike was yamaha. He was cross motorcycle. Next day I rode cross track.I was very happy. I don't forgot this day!

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Matt [ I Am The Night ]

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The best day of my life was the 10th of April. This was an uncommon day. I was at home. This day began as usual. The sun was shining, birds were singing I woke up around 10 o'clock. I went to the kitchen and had breakfest. The phone suddenly rang. I answered it and heard my father's voice. He said that he had a surprise for me but I must wait till the evening. I was very excited. In the evening my father arrived home. Through the window I saw a green van. I thought that this surprise must be very big. I ran outside the house. In the green van there was a red motorbike. This was my biggest dream. Motorbike's brand was yamaha. It was a cross motorcycle. Next day I went riding the cross track. I was very happy. I will never forget this day!