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J. Angielski - prosba o sprawdzenie poprawnosci textu.
Witam,
Siora ma na jutro prace z angielskiego i poprosila mnie abym jej to sprawdzil,
ale moj angielski nie jest az tak wyrafinowany, aby wypatrzyc jej bledy.
Takze, prosze o sprawdzenie textu, a jak zobaczycie jakies byki, to napiszcie co mam jej zmienic.
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Hello my dear friend! I missed you very much and I have so much to tell you.
I arrived three hours ago and I'm really tired. Flight was good, but next to me sitting some strange guy, who can't even talk one word to me.
What a disaster, I flew for six hours and I can't even talk to anybody. Can't sleep either.
First of all I wanna thank you for kindness and for these pink boots you send to me, they're beautiful. Yesterday I was in the cinema with my two new friends and Kasia.
First one is James and he's 17 years old. Second one is John, James older brother, he's 20 year old and he have he's own car. Ferrari I supposed.
But before that, we ware on breakfast in amazing place .They called them “Masahitti”
I ask them why they call them so strange. John sad it's because his yellow hear and Italian super cars. We really have good time.
Next day morning me and Kasia eat some eggs and pie for breakfast.
After that we go to our new good friends. We meet them near river called “Laguna”.
John have beautiful flowers for us, but James was the one, who's have the nicest smile in the whole world!
Finally we go to walk. John with Kasia, and me... with James.
It was really fun. I never think, that I can ever like blond boys, but he's different...
Claudia, my dear! I think I'm falling in love!
My legs are so soft, I can't sleep and I can't stop thinking about him!
I think I'm gonna marry him and we gonna have children.
My first girl I'm gonna named it with your name!
Please, write me back, quickly,
love,
Paula
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Matt [ I Am The Night ]
The flight was good, but there was some strange guy sitting next to me, he didnt even speak one word to me. What a disaster, I was on board for six hours and I couldn't even speak to anybody. Couldn't sleep either.
First of all I wanna thank you for your kindness and for these pink boots you sent me.
Second one is John, James' older brother
But before that, we had breakfast in an amazing place. It's called “Masahitti”
I ask them why they call them so strange. John sad it's because his yellow hear and Italian super cars >> to zdanie jest niezrozumiale, zakladajac ze Masahitti to nazwa knajpy...
Next day morning me and Kasia ate (lepiej: had) some eggs and pie for breakfast.
After that we went to our new good friends. We met them near the river called “Laguna”.
John had beautiful flowers for us, but James was the one, who has the nicest smile in the whole world!
Finally we went for a walk. John with Kasia, and me... with James.
It was really fun. I never thought, that I could ever fancy blond boys, but he's different...
My legs are so soft... (LOL)
My first girl I'm gonna name with your name!
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tak powinno byc spoko
MasterDD [ :-D ]
Matt -> Dziekuje :-)