Pomózcie mi z Angola PLEASE :D

30.05.2007

20:45

[1]

SaTaNa [ Pretorianin ]

Pomózcie mi z Angola PLEASE :D

Mam opisać ma ubiona strone internetowa wiec bez wachani wybieram www.gry-online.pl :]

Mam ja opisane w tej chwili w ten sposób:

The adress of my favourite website is www.gry-online.pl. A lot of players are visit this site.
If you are one of them and you didn't hear about this... You must go [nie wiem czy ma byc tu HERE\THERE]!!
On home page we can find heading like this: "Gracz Info", "Forum", "Galeria", Komórki" and the others. On some of this pages we can find the newest information and reviews of games on PC and the others consoles. If you hurry you can use search engine.
We can also download trailers, patches, demo games[mam nadzieje ze tak sie to pisze DEMO GAMES :D], screenshots and _____ [nie moge znaleźć odpowiedniego znaczenia PORADNIK]
Finally [I tu nie wiem co mam napisac ;)]

Pomożecie?? DLA GOLA :D

30.05.2007

20:46

[2]

misztel [ +0,10gr! ]

poradnik - guide? ;>

30.05.2007

20:48

[5]

Loczek [ El Loco Boracho ]

Napisz od nowa i się przyłóż... chciałem poprawić błędy ale wszystko bym ci musiał pozmieniać ;P

30.05.2007

21:32

[8]

Boginka [ Sybarytka ]

No dobra - prosta zasada. Pogrubienie oznacza błąd. Jaki to już się sam domyśl, może być wszystko - zły czasownik, błąd a/the, zły zwrot, brak preposition (of, at, etc.)

The adress of my favourite website is www.gry-online.pl. A lot of players are visit this site.
If you are one of them and you didn't hear about this [this co?] You must go [ani jedno ani drugie, inna struktura]. On home page we can find heading like this: "Gracz Info", "Forum", "Galeria", Komórki" and the others. On some of this pages we can find the newest information and reviews of games on PC and the others consoles. If you hurry you can use search engine.
We can also download trailers, patches, demo games, screenshots and walkthroughs.
Finally [no to coś wymyśl]