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Wypracowanie, j angielski, kto sprawdzi? :)

21.05.2007
21:36
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TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]

Wypracowanie, j angielski, kto sprawdzi? :)

Napisalem wypracowanie na angol, ale na pewno zrobilem conajmniej pare bledow :) Jak ktos ma czas to moglby to sprawdzic i ewentualnei poprawic.

My last Sunday
Sunday is a day, when I can relax, because I have got a lot of free time then. My last Sunday started at 10 o’clock. I woke up and went to the bathroom to take a shower. After that I had a breakfast, wchich was prepared by my mum. About 12 o’clock my whole family went together to a church service. When we were back my mum was preparing the dinner, and I was surfing on the Internet to find her some recipes. In the afternoon I met with my friends in the centre of a town. We were walking when somebody offered to go to the nearby zoo. We agreed and bought tickets. In the garden there were many amazing animals like crocodiles or tigres. We had a lots of fun, especially when we were looking at monkeys.

To jeszcze nie jest dokonczone, ale poki co mam tyle~~

21.05.2007
21:38
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hctkko [ The Prodigy ]

wchich
powinno być which :)

21.05.2007
21:39
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3w [ Konsul ]

powinno być dobre

21.05.2007
21:39
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TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]

Nie no to literowka :) Chodzi mi bardziej o czasy^^

21.05.2007
21:41
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Wilkol4k [ Pretorianin ]

Co to za shit? Składnia zdań jak z podstawówki.

21.05.2007
21:51
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TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]

Wilkol4k -> Nie pytalem o ocene tej pracy, tylko o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawienie bledow. Skoro juz wypowiedziales sie w tym temacie, to albo pokaz mi zdania w ktorych jest jakis BLAD skladni i jak mozesz to popraw to co sie da, a jak nie, to wroc do wspomnianej przez Ciebie podstawowki i naucz sie czytac ze zrozumieniem...

21.05.2007
21:57
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After that I had a breakfast, wchich had been prepared by my mum. At about 12 o’clock my whole family went together to church. When we had been back, my mum started preparing the dinner and I was looking up some recipes for her on the Internet. In the afternoon I met with my friends in the town centre. Near zoo. There were many amazing animals like crocodiles or tigres in the zoo. A lot of fun (albo lots of fun).

Ale za 100% poprawnosc nie recze, nie mialem dawno kontaktu z jezykiem :-)
Czemu z uporem maniaka stosujesz past continous? :-)

21.05.2007
22:00
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MadaKosnik [ Konsul ]

started preparing

Coś mi tu śmierdzi @[email protected]

21.05.2007
22:04
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MadaKosnik ---> Dlaczego? Starting preparing by bylo przekombinowane, ale to?

21.05.2007
22:10
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Ladylucia [ Centurion ]

Past Continuous jakoś ludziom łatwiej do głowy wchodzi, niż Past Perfect;) Mogę potwierdzic na przykładzie mojej klasy;P

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