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TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]
Wypracowanie, j angielski, kto sprawdzi? :)
Napisalem wypracowanie na angol, ale na pewno zrobilem conajmniej pare bledow :) Jak ktos ma czas to moglby to sprawdzic i ewentualnei poprawic.
My last Sunday
Sunday is a day, when I can relax, because I have got a lot of free time then. My last Sunday started at 10 o’clock. I woke up and went to the bathroom to take a shower. After that I had a breakfast, wchich was prepared by my mum. About 12 o’clock my whole family went together to a church service. When we were back my mum was preparing the dinner, and I was surfing on the Internet to find her some recipes. In the afternoon I met with my friends in the centre of a town. We were walking when somebody offered to go to the nearby zoo. We agreed and bought tickets. In the garden there were many amazing animals like crocodiles or tigres. We had a lots of fun, especially when we were looking at monkeys.
To jeszcze nie jest dokonczone, ale poki co mam tyle~~
hctkko [ The Prodigy ]
wchich
powinno być which :)
3w [ Konsul ]
powinno być dobre
TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]
Nie no to literowka :) Chodzi mi bardziej o czasy^^
Wilkol4k [ Pretorianin ]
Co to za shit? Składnia zdań jak z podstawówki.
TiAmo [ Pretorianin ]
Wilkol4k -> Nie pytalem o ocene tej pracy, tylko o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawienie bledow. Skoro juz wypowiedziales sie w tym temacie, to albo pokaz mi zdania w ktorych jest jakis BLAD skladni i jak mozesz to popraw to co sie da, a jak nie, to wroc do wspomnianej przez Ciebie podstawowki i naucz sie czytac ze zrozumieniem...
@d@m [ ]
After that I had a breakfast, wchich had been prepared by my mum. At about 12 o’clock my whole family went together to church. When we had been back, my mum started preparing the dinner and I was looking up some recipes for her on the Internet. In the afternoon I met with my friends in the town centre. Near zoo. There were many amazing animals like crocodiles or tigres in the zoo. A lot of fun (albo lots of fun).
Ale za 100% poprawnosc nie recze, nie mialem dawno kontaktu z jezykiem :-)
Czemu z uporem maniaka stosujesz past continous? :-)
MadaKosnik [ Konsul ]
started preparing
Coś mi tu śmierdzi @d@m
@d@m [ ]
MadaKosnik ---> Dlaczego? Starting preparing by bylo przekombinowane, ale to?
Ladylucia [ Centurion ]
Past Continuous jakoś ludziom łatwiej do głowy wchodzi, niż Past Perfect;) Mogę potwierdzic na przykładzie mojej klasy;P