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10.05.2007
20:14
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Vegetan [ Zbieramy pieniążki ]

Czy mógłbym łaskawych forowiczów prosić o sprawdzenie...

...mojej recenzji z angielskiego? Wg. tematu miał to być film, który wpłynął na moje życie. Z góry dziękuję za wytknięcie mi wszystkich moich błędów.

Butterfly effect is the film you'll never forget, because it's not an ordinary movie. Scenario and direction made by Eric Bress and J. Mackye Gruber is impressing with it's unexpected twists and keeping viewers in suspence. The best side of scenario is it's psychological aspect and it's versatility.
Evan Treborn, the main character of the film, seems to be an usual boy. He lives in small american city, has his team, sometimes smokes marijuhana. He also write the diaries, after having short-time amnesias in the childhood, what is a recommendation of his physician. Due to the fact, that he and his team did something really bad, his mother decide to move. After years he reads his diaries and he inquires, that he can change the past. However, one change result in the need to change other things.
The producers must be people endowned with vivid imagination, because the plot is very complicated and hard to guess. Mysterious story and untypical history keep the viewers on the edge of those seats. The cast is really convincing. As I said, the movie is filled with unexpected twists, always when everything seems to be good, something must happen. Excellent workmanship sets this film in a big box-office succes.
I highly recommend it, because it's not only a movie, this is an presentation how human's decisions influence in his and his friends future. And this trump of the film made a change in my life: to foresight my actions.

10.05.2007
20:29
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Vegetan [ Zbieramy pieniążki ]

Upnę może, bo potrzebuję to szybko przepisać.

10.05.2007
20:40
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Vegetan [ Zbieramy pieniążki ]

Ostatnie próba

10.05.2007
20:49
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endrju771 [ Teleinformatyk ]

W pierwszym zdaniu "Butterfly effect is the film you'll never forget" lepiej byłoby "Butterfly effect is film that you'll never forget". W zdaniu "He lives in american city, has his team, sometimes smokes marijuana" zmień kolejność na np. "He has his team/group, he lives in small american town where sometimes smokes marijuana". W następnym zdaniu "He also write" zgubiłeś "s". Zamiast "I highly recommend it" wstaw może "I recommend it a lot", później w tym zdaniu "influence in his and his friends future" powinno być "influence on him and his friends future". W ostatnim zdaniu wydaje mi się, że powinno być "film made some changes in my life, one of them is to foresight my actions".

10.05.2007
21:35
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Vistorante [ teh_pwnerer ]

Butterfly effect is a film that you'll never forget since it's not an ordinary movie. Scenario and direction made by Eric Bress and J. Mackye Gruber is impressing with its unexpected twists and keeping viewers in suspence. The best side of the scenario is its psychological aspect and its versatility.
Evan Treborn, the main character of the film, seems to be an usual boy. He lives in a small american city, has his team, sometimes smokes marijuhana. He also writes the diaries, after having short-time amnesias in the childhood, following the recommendation of his physician. Due to the fact that he and his team did something really bad, his mother decides to move away. After years he reads his diaries and suddenly finds out that he is able to change the past. However, one change results in the need to change other things.
The producers must have very vivid imagination, because the plot is complicated and hard to guess ahead. Mysterious story and untypical history keep the viewers on the edge of their seats. The cast is really convincing. As I said, the movie is filled with unexpected twists - just when everything seems to be good, something happens all of a sudden. Excellent workmanship sets this film in a big box-office succes.
I highly recommend it because it's not only a movie, this is a presentation how human's decisions can influence his and his friends future. And this trump of the film made a change in my life: to foresight my actions.

Ostatniego zdania nie rozumiem, może napisz coś innego.

10.05.2007
21:40
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darek_dragon [ 42 ]

Butterfly effect is a film you will never forget because it is not an ordinary movie. Screenplay and direction both by Eric Bress and J. Mackye Gruber are impressive. Unexpected plot twists easily keep viewers in suspence. The best side of screenplay is its psychological aspect and versatility.
Evan Treborn, the main character of the film, seems to be an usual boy. He lives in a small American city, has his team (friends?), sometimes smokes marijuhana. He also writes a diary what is a recommendation of his physician because he used to have short-time amnesias in the childhood. Due to the fact that he and his team (friends? gang?) had done something really bad his mother decided to move. After years while reading his diaries he inquires (discovers? learns?) that he can change the past. However, one change results in the need to change other things. (coś jest nie tak z tym zdaniem, ale nie mam pomysłu :)
The producers have to be people endowed with vivid imagination because the plot is very complicated and unpredictable. Mysterious and untypical story keep the viewers on the edge of their seats. The cast (actors' performance?) is really convincing. As I said, the movie is filled with unexpected twists. Always when everything seems to be good, something must happen. Excellent workmanship resulted in a big (huge? enormous?) box-office success.
I highly recommend it because it is not only a movie - it is an example of how human's decisions influence his own and his friends' future. And this message made a change in (had an impact on?) my life: I learned to foresight my actions.

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