POMOC z języka angielskiego (błędy)

30.04.2007

10:21

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ddza [ WasabiHubert ]

POMOC z języka angielskiego (błędy)

Będę bardzo wdzięczny jeśli ktoś przeczyta ten list i sprawdzi czy popełniłem jakieś błędy i napisze mi jak je skorygować.




Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of designer. I saw your advertisement on www.work.com yesterday. I would be interested in design modern houses or apartaments. I enclose a copy of my CV.

I would like to work for you, because I am very interested in design. I thing, that work in your company would be challenge for me.

I am a hard-working and commited person. For the last 4 years, I have worked in two companys of designer but this companys are small and I would like to make us of my skills in serious company, like yours. I have made abaout one thaousand projects and if it is necessary I will send some of them.

I think I am a good designer and I am the best candidate for the position in your company. I am also creative and I love modern art. In addition, I have special courses in design and painting, which might be useful. Also, I know three foreign languages: Polish German and France.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


XXX

Moshimo [ FullMetal ]

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of designer. I saw your advertisement on www.work.com yesterday. I would be interested in modern houses or apartaments designing(w sumie nie jestem pewien) :P. I enclose a copy of my CV.

I would like to work for you, because I am very interested in designing. I think that working in your company would be challenge for me.

I am a hard-working and commited person. For the last 4 years, I have worked in two designing companies but (albo these companies, albo po prostu they, lepiej to drugie are small and I would like to make use of my skills in a serious company, like yours. I have made about one thousand projects and if it is necessary I will send some of them.

I think I am a good designer and I am the best candidate for the position in your company. I am also creative and I love modern art. In addition, I have special courses in designing and painting, which might be useful. Also, I know three foreign languages: Polish, German and French.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


XXX
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W sumie ogolnie bylo ok, sam nie jestem pewien np odnosnie tego design/designing.
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