Prośba o sprawdzenie błędów z angielskiego.

Krasper [ Konsul ]

Prośba o sprawdzenie błędów z angielskiego.

Mógłby ktos dobry z anglika poprawić błędy ?

Postcard to a friend:

Hi Jack! Best wishes from always sunny and always hot beaches of Copacabana.l I arrived here only one week ago about ten o'clock , but feel it's one of the better places to live in ! My hotel is maybe too expensive , but the rest is fantastic. Restaurant have a very good food and the rooms are big and ful of sun. I'm planning to became a surfer tomorrow , because surfing is very popular here especially among young people. I hope you have a great parties and great fun too. Yours XYZ

Formal letter:
Dear Sir or Madam
I'm writing to ask dor information about English cours I;ve planned to go , but I still don;t have any answer. I;ve signed myself into English Course for students in advance level but I didn't get any reply to my sign. I called to the office and I recorded myself into answering machine. I regret didn't send me any answer , because I can't plan my trip. Please send me any answer give me the money back.

Yours faithfully

Nowadays we live in society , where informations extend in ghuge speed difficult to understand by people who live different times for example in XIX century. If some arabic terrorits kill some innocent people for example in N.Y we know about it few minutes later. I heard that we became in a month as many informations as our grandfathers in their whole life. Tons of informations that we see everywhere force us to make a kind of selection. We can't focus on every information in newspapers , because it;s rather impossible and nobody has a time for it. Everyone has to make his own strategy of reading , but majority of people included me read only a cartoon and the titles and then if some title looks interesting to me read the rest. If I want to read everything I;ll spend the whole day on this activity. The second place where people read is Internet. Almost every important newspaper has it;s own web page. There are milions of articles i Internet that we're interested in so we have to read in similar way as we read newspapers. We focus only on interesting things. I think that development of technology affect to the way tahat people read.

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Huh, sporo tego. Nie chce mi sie wszystkiego poprawiac, ale: przed but i because nie dajemy przecinka, information nie ma liczby mnogiej, w liscie formalnym nie uzywamy skrocen w stylu: isn't, can't itd., jesli listy maja byc na poziomie maturalnym, to brakuje Ci troche (20-30) slow, jakis tytul - a title. Some uzywa sie do liczby mnogiej. It's i its to dwie rozne rzeczy. Zasadniczo nie tworzy sie zdan-tasiemcow (Everyone has to make his own strategy of reading , but majority of people included (winno byc including) me read only a cartoon and the titles and then if some title looks interesting to me read the rest) - potnij to jakos.