Angielski - Czy ktos moze mi poprawić głędy?

17.12.2006

15:20

[1]

.coma. [ Pretorianin ]

Angielski - Czy ktos moze mi poprawić głędy?

Czy mógłby ktoś poprawić błedy (oraz zawartosc jesli tego wymaga)? To dla mnie bardzo wazne.

pierwszy list:
Ma to być krótka forma uzytkowa,tresc polecenia:
Przebywasz u angielskiej rodziny na wymianie, która ma potrwac 2 miesiace napis do swojego znajomego, ktory mieszka w anglii:
-poinformuj go, że własnioe przybyłeś do anglii
-napisz w jakim celu przybyles
-podaj na jak długo i gdzie sie zatrzymałes
-wyraź, madzieje, że odiwedzisz go w najbiższy weekend

Hi!
How are you? I'm writting to tell you that I'm in England. I've come to your country on exchange. I will be know English's culture and customs. I live in Adela's house on the Big street. I come to England for two months. I hope I will visit you in next weekend.

drugi list:
polecenie:
własnie wróciłeś z górskiej wyprawy, która bardzo utrudnił Ci źle napisany przewodnik. Napisz list do wydawców tego przewodnika
-wyjasnij cel listu i określ o który przewodnik chodzi
-opisz gdzie byles i w jakich okolicznosciach urzywałeś przewodnika
-opisz krótko problemy z przewodnikiem oraz ich konsekwencje
-zasugeruj w jaki sposób mozna poprawic przewodnik i zaproponuj swoją pomoc

Dear Sir,
I am writting to complain about guide book. It is guide to Alpy from 2005 year. I have used it on my trip in this mountain. I have trayed go black hiking trail and seen place which you describe, but it been impossible. I have not find "Black Rock" and "Small Waterfla". Route is bad describe. You have describe in unit "Black Hiking" place with red hiking. In addition place which you describe are in other spot. Short cuts are bad described. When I have used your guidebook I have lost. I have not seen much wonderfull place, and I waste my time and nerves.
I think that you should correct the mistakes. Guidebook need be write by people who been in this place. You should correct describe black hiking becouse place are bad locate. If you want to I can correct mistakes in this guide. Ihave been in Alpy and I know this mountains. If you are interested my proposition, you will write me back.
yours faithfully,
XYZ

17.12.2006

16:06

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.coma. [ Pretorianin ]

17.12.2006

19:32

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sekret_mnicha [ the_collector ]

W piwerwszym zmienilbym jeszcze to:

I've come to your country on a student exchange. Hopefully I will get to know English culture and customs.

A oto drugi:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about your ‘Alps 2005 Guide Book’. I have used it during my trip to these mountains. I have tried to ‹! Tutaj nie bardzo wiem o co ci chodzi, wiec sotsuje wlasna interpretacje :) !› find a black hiking trail and such places as The Black Rock and A Small Waterfall, but I have failed – the route is poorly described. In addition the places shown in the guide are mislocated and shortcuts are not where they should be. I got lost after using your guide book and did not see many wonderful places I wanted to.

I believe that you should correct the mistakes. A guidebook has to be written by people who have been in places they describe. Therefore I present you with an opportunity – I have been to the Alps and I will be glad to correct the guide book. Should you be interested in my proposition – please write back. My address …. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,
XYZ

Troche pozmienialem, ale tak moim zdaniem jest lepiej. I raczej nie stosuje sie propozycji zawodownych w czyms zwanym 'letter of complaint', ale jesli juz chcesz...

NO!