Angielski -Pomoc w zadaniu (poprawcie bledy)

11.12.2006

21:26

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jjiinn [ Pretorianin ]

Angielski -Pomoc w zadaniu (poprawcie bledy)

Witam!
Miałem napsiac opowiadanie a nie jestem w tym zby biegły :D wiec znajac moje mozliwosci zrobilenm mase bledow. Dlatego chcialbym zeby ktos mi je poprawil :) licze na was : )z gory dzieki ide pobiegac mam nadzieje ze jak wroce to ktos juz to poprawi :)

Every Year I spent my hooliday in France in Paris. I very like this city. So I look forward to the moment when I arrived to this city again.
When this instant come, I wos very happy. Finaly I could rest for my senior high school. My trip wos very peaceful. I didn't have any problems. My brother pick up for the airport and we went to his home. i wos sleepy becouse my journey wos long so I went to bed.
Next day I went with my friend too sports field. he told me that football couch came sometimes there. When we finished over game strange men come to us and he said that we have big talent and skill's and we could play in football club also he said that if we only want we will play in PSG in junior section under 18. At this moment I know the dream come true.

jjiinn [ Pretorianin ]

up (na jutro to potrzebuje :/ )