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Red Riding Hood on the way to grandma...
Red Riding Hood on the way to grandma...
Once upon a time, there was a girl,
with a very long, beautiful hair,
When a little girl met her old friend Wolf,
she asked him if he could give her his helpful Wolfi hand,
All he had to do for the Riding Hood,
was to take her to a wonderful neighbourhood,
(another planet – I want you to know),
place where grandma lives,
and where money growns on trees,
When they were flying his charter spaceplane,
something broke down, and „We’ll gonna die” screamed little girl,
Then the machine crashed in the Jungle,
After couple of days, when the Riding Hood,
woke up and changed her name (after friends dead) to Bloody Boot,
She started to pass along some Wild Woods,
killing anyone who might have had boots,
Couse her – had worn out,
so she had to take native poeple out,
and searched their bodies for any tramps,
When she found nothing she fell in trance
Little girl would have already been dead,
hadn’t she beautiful stranger met,
Seeing her torment,
he saved her from passing away,
and took the body to his own bay,
There was a big ship with a lot of crew,
They wanted to force little Riding Hood,
nickname – Bloody Boot,
to do things she would never do,
(they wanted to defile her – if someone didn’t know)
But she wasn’t so unarmed with her new, pretty toy,
In others rings named „END OF BIG NASTY BOYS CHAIN-SAW”,
and she killed averyone on that yacht,
so nobody from crew had of that slaughter thought,
After she had fully control of that modern boat,
the Riding Hood transform it to something „Star Ship Destroyer” called ,
and flied to her grandma planet without any trouble,
so she had at last a bath with a lots of boubles,
When she told her grandmother that tale,
Poor, old women died and she to the beyond sailed,
The last thing left Riding Hood Story to fill in,
was to came back Bloody Boot to home with grandma’s will.
Prawda, że ładny wierszyk? Własnie przeglądałem swoje stare zbiory z liceum, gdy na to wpadłem. Swego czasu miałem napisać wierszyk na angielski. Pokręcony był wówczas umysł _tego dziecka ;p
Dziobak_90 [ Pretorianin ]
doczytalem do polowy,nawet niezly,ale reszty mi sie nie chcialo.Dalej potrafisz pisac wiersze?