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PunkNotDead [ Konsul ]
Proszę o poprawienie pracy z j. angielskiego.
Nie jestem zbyt dobry z angielskiego, więc proszę o poprawę błędów :P
Computer in my life
I've got computer since 1990. On start a computer serve for me to entertainment. I played many hours any game, on start a racing game through FPP game(First Person Perspective) to RPG(Role Playing Game). One year later I've got an internet. I loving surf in the internet to search many interesting informations. When I knew the internet I was interested the MMORPG(Massive Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game). In my opinion these games're the most interesting, because you can play with people from every world. When game was a too boring I going to learn create websites, so I very fast learned HTML(HyperText Markup Language) language. I've got some websites. I tried learn programme, but it's a too difficulty. Now a computer serve for me only to play in MMORPG, learn and talk with friends.
VYKR_ [ Vykromod ]
Computer in my life
I've got computer since 1990. On start
On start? nie spotkalem sie albo mam skleroze; chyba raczej At the beginning
a computer
nie "a", tego sie uzywa jak mowisz o czyms po raz pierwszy. albo "the" albo w ogole bez.
serves
tzw. simple present
me for the entertainment.
I played many hours any game
nie chwytam sensu zdania. w przeszlosci? - "I played each game for many hours" w terazniejszosci? - present simple wzglednie perfect
on start
beginning from / throughout
a racing game through FPP game(First Person Perspective) to RPG(Role Playing Game).
racing and FFP(First Person Perspective) games to RPG(Role Playing Games).
One year later I've got an internet.
na dyskietce? prosciej byloby: I've got Internet since ... (taki mirror pierwszego zdania)
I loving surf in the internet to search many interesting informations.
"loving" to moze sobie uzywac McDonald's ale to wyjatek :p Gdy mowisz co lubisz, preferujesz etc. uzywaj Present Simple. Cool people say: I love surfing the Net and search for a shitload of cool stuff!
When I knew the internet I was interested the MMORPG(Massive Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game).
to bym w ogole wywalil, to jak powiedziec, ze grasz w Tibie - porazka... ale jesli zostawisz to uzyj sformuowania "as soon as I..."
In my opinion these games're the most interesting, because you can play with people from every world.
Mon! In my opinion, MMORPGs are the most interesting games, because you can play with people from all around the world.
When game was a too boring I going to learn create websites, so I very fast learned HTML(HyperText Markup Language) language. I've got some websites.
When I grew tired of playing computer games, I learned HTML(HyperText Markup Language) in no time. Now I own GOL.
I tried learn programme, but it's a too difficulty. Now a computer serve for me only to play in MMORPG, learn and talk with friends.
I tried to learn programming, but it's way too difficult for me. Now I use my computer only to watch porn, learn some shit, watch porn, talk with underaged women and watch porn.
BBC BB [ massive attack ]
Now I use my computer only to watch porn, learn some shit, watch porn, talk with underaged women and watch porn.
PunkNotDead -->> Przepisz do samego końca tak jak Ci kolega podał :P
PunkNotDead [ Konsul ]
dziękuję :)
<--- Ale ostatnie zdanie zostawie tak jak mam
VYKR_ [ Vykromod ]
To ja sie tyle mecze, pietnascie razy edytuje posta zeby to jakos wygladalo, a ty i tak zostawiasz jak bylo! Ach ta dzisiejsza mlodzież...
A tak w ogole to you're welcome.
Van Gray [ taki szary freestyler ]
PunkNotDead -> Łojezu, a która Ty klasa jesteś? :F
VYKR -> Ostatnie zdanie świetne, znakomicie podsumowywuje zdolności lingwistyczne kolegi, jego zapał do odrabiania prac domowych, stosunek dzisiejszej młodzieży do nauki i w ogóle kondycję polskiej oświaty ;)
Poza tym kawał dobrej roboty, kowboju.