Sprawdzenie rozprawki z anglika

Trilok [ Centurion ]

Sprawdzenie rozprawki z anglika

ok na jutro mam rozprawke napisac wiec szybko cos naskrobalem , moze mi ktos sprawdzic czy nie ma jakis bledow ? :)

„Fame results is a loss of freedom”

True or false ?

Fame can be defined as being a very popular and known person. Most people believe that being famous person is very easy and good. But the other people argue that fame limits our life and it has destructive effects on relationships.
It is true that famous people have a better life. They have a lot of money, everybody knows them, they are invited to the exclusive parties, producers are giving them a free samples of their products, they are recognized on the streets. But this is not everything. When they are going out to have fun , they are invited to the v.i.p. sections in the best clubs in town.
On the other hand, famous people have no private life. Everybody knows everything about them. They can’t go out without make up, they can’t go to the normal shop without making a big fuss and sensation. They have to behave properly because if they make a little mistake , they will be on the first page of the newspaper. In fact , they can’t do a lot of normal things that we can do whenever we wants. But this is not all. They could be in great danger too because many people hates famous people and they can attack them or even kill them. They are like in a prison, every move is noticed and restricted.
In conclusion, fame is good only for those who has strong nerves. It is better to be a normal person because we can do everything what we wants and nobody can tell us what to do.

Boroova [ Lazy Bastard ]

„Fame results is a loss of freedom”

True or false ?

Fame can be defined as (a state of) being a very popular and known (po co powtarzac ze jest sie znanym 2 razy - popular and known?) person. Most people believe that being famous person is very easy and good (daj "pleasant" zamiast 'good'). But the other (nie 'the other, tylko 'other') people argue that fame limits our life ('lives' bedzie lepsze) and it has destructive effects on ('human') relationships.
It is true that famous people have a better life ('lives'). They have a lot of money, everybody knows them, they are ('being') invited to the exclusive ('exclusive' a nie 'the exclusive') parties, producers are giving them a free samples of their products, they are recognized on the streets. But this is (nie 'this is' tylko 'it is') not everything. When they are going out to have fun , they are invited to the v.i.p. sections in the best clubs in town.
On the other hand, famous people have no private life. Everybody knows everything about them. They can’t go out without make up, they can’t go to the normal shop ('normal' mi tu nie pasuje - i nie dawaj 'the' jesli jest nieokreslony sklep)without making a big fuss and sensation ('sensation'??? WTF??) . They have to behave properly because if they make a little mistake ('a small mistake' zamiast 'little'), they will be on the first page ('front page' of the newspapers)of the newspaper. In fact , they can’t do a lot of normal things that we can do whenever we wants ('we want'). But this is ('that is' a nie 'this') not all. They could be in great danger too, because many people hates famous people and they can attack them or even kill them. They are like in a prison, every move is noticed and restricted.
In conclusion, fame is good only for those who has strong nerves. It is better to be a normal person because we can do everything what we wants and nobody can tell us what to do. (jak piszesz normal person, to trzymaj sie liczby pojedynczej w calym zdaniu)