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Krala [ Pretorianin ]
angielski - wypracowanko - korekta :)
Bym prosil o korektę bo nie dam głowy czy czegos nie pochrzanilem :)...
It was possibly a normal day in UK, France, Poland and other countries. But not in United States, where the Apollo rocket had taken off from the Cape Kennedy and was flying to the moon. After a few days of flight lunar module separated from spacecraft. Now lunar module could land on the moon. Neil Amstrong had steped on the moon and he took (tu na bank coś) some moon stones, becouse they would be usable on Earth for all types of analysis. He had gone a few meters and put an Americas flag on the moon. Theirs mission had been accomplished and now they could come back. Lunar module took off from moon. When they were ready to land on Earth, there had been waiting a helicopter. They had landed in the ocen and stay the started to be most famous people of the world.
Chodzilo o to by uzyc wiele razy czasy Past Simple i Past Perfect oraz when, after, becouse. Prosilbym o wylapanie ewentualnych bledow. Z gory dzieki.
Krala [ Pretorianin ]
hm... up? :)
wysiu [ ]
"Prosilbym o wylapanie ewentualnych bledow"
becouse
Krala [ Pretorianin ]
Wysiu - to wszystko czy więcej Ci sie nie chcialo szukać ;)?
Krala [ Pretorianin ]
A helicopter had waited for them over the ocean, on the spot where they were expected to land
Krala [ Pretorianin ]
Soon they became one of the most famous people in the world
peanut [ kriegsmaschine ]
jak na moj gust, past perfect uzywales na sile i troche to nie brzmi. relacje brzmia spojniej w past simple.
Neil Amstrong had steped on the moon and he took (tu na bank coś) some moon stones, becouse they would be usable on Earth for all types of analysis.
stepped out, took some moon rocks/minerals, because they could be usable (moze a good source of knowledge).
He had gone a few meters and put an Americas flag on the moon
tutaj dorzucilbym after he had..., he put an american flag
Theirs mission had been accomplished and now they could come back
their mission was accomplished
When they were ready to land on Earth, there had been waiting a helicopter
kiedy byli gotowi wyladowac, juz wczesniej na nich czekal smiglowiec. wtf?;)
They had landed in the ocen and stay the started to be most famous people of the world.
ocean, to be the most famous people in the world, a w ogole had landed, potem stay i started = sraczka i nic z tego tez nie rozumiem.