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Kiszka [ Centurion ]
Kto pomoze w wykryciu paru bledow w teksie - j.anglielski?
Wiem, ze swieta ale jednak troche nauczyciele z zadankami szaleja, bo kazdy z nich mysli, ze jak zwykle uczen to nie bedzie mial nic doroboty wiec trzeba mu "troszke" cos zadac, by sie nie nudzil. I tak tych "troszke" mi sie juz uzbieralo, ze mam praktycznie reszte swiatecznych dni z glowy... ;(
No i mam to jedno zadanko z angola - napisac historyjke, ktora zaczyna sie od "It was a beautiful spring day". No i wymyslilem sobie takie cos i mam prosbe - czy moglby ktos to sprawdzic, czy dobrze i ewentualnie poprawic bledy? Z gory dziekuje za pomoc!
It was a beautiful spring day. It was warm and sunny. I and decided to go on Mazury on short holiday. In a newspaper we found a nice advertisement about a little and cheap summer house.
Next day we were on place. Then we experienced a nightmare. The house, where we intended to stay, was very decrepit, ugly and dirty. Inside there were only two little rooms – a bedroom and a kitchen connected to a living room. There wasn’t any toilet. When we couldn’t sleep because same drunk people were very noisy. Then Kate shout: “Look! Someone has just stolen our car!”.
We tried to call the police, but the telephone didn’t work. The weather was rainy and cold. We couldn’t stay there. We didn’t have a car, so we started to go on foot to the police station. It was dark and then some big and bald man attacked us. He had a gun and he took all our money. We couldn’t believe that had really happened.
All luck we got to the police station. We were wet and exhausted. After a twenty minutes the policeman came and he told as that he had caught theft and bandit. Unfortunately our car wasn’t found. When we came back from the horrible trip, we promised that we would never again go on Mazury.
DEXiu [ Konsul ]
Powiedz że to prowokacja. Proszę, powiedz że prowokacja. Człowieku. Ty w zdaniu, w którym można zrobić 3 błędy robisz ich 6.
^KoKoT^ [ Generaďż˝ ]
OMG! Tlumaczyles to English Translatorem z wersji polskiej? eeee nie, on by zrobil mniej bledow :| Sory, ale nie czytam tego, bo za rok mam mature, a na moj nie za wysoki poziom, twoj tekst mnie w ogole zgarsza.