PROszę poprawcie mnie jak mam jakies błedny albo coś dodajcie.

kupcia77 [ Jestem FACET ]

PROszę poprawcie mnie jak mam jakies błedny albo coś dodajcie.

Nauczycielka kazala nam napisac wypracowanie o prababci proszę spójrzcie czy mmam jakieś błędy i napiszcie coś co mogę jeszcze dodać bo mi nic nie przychodzi do gówy z góry dziękuję.


My greatgrandmother


My greatgrandmother name is Wiktoria.She lived in Skoki.She worked on farm.She lived 86 years old.She was clever women.Her eyes are blue and her hair is bronze.Her favourite colour was blue.Wiktoria had pigs and chickens.She was low person.My greatgrandmother liked white horses.She had 6 childrens.She liked runed.

gofer [ ]

My greatgrandmother name was Wiktoria.She lived in Skoki.She worked on farm.She lived for 86 years. She was clever women.Her eyes were blue and her hair was bronze. Her favourite colour was blue.Wiktoria had pigs and chickens.She was low person. My greatgrandmother liked white horses.She had 6 childrens.She liked runed.

to tak na szybko, niech ktoś sprawdzi dokładniej bo ja nie mam czasu

Wypowiedź została zmodyfikowana przez jej autora [2005-10-04 18:59:25]