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Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
Pomocy z j. ang. - sprawdźcie czy dobrze napisałem :)
mam takie mini wypracowanie n.t. filmu "The Truman Show"... bardzo byłbym wdzięczny jakbyście napisali jakie błędy popełniłem... z góry dzięki :)
"Do you know how many cameras are mounted in your town, wgere are you living? Zero? Maybe 10 or 10 millions... Let's think - what's would be your humour, when you would be a TV hero and you don't know anthing about it... Truman Burbank (actor - Jim Carrey) - good man with great family is a hero in "The Truman Show" - TV show about him and his friends... All people in his living town are actors, but he don't know about it. One day everything change... He feel something weard... I don't want tell you everything about this film. You must see it alone. All in all - this film is... very unique. This is an action film, great comedy and wonderfull dramatic. It's strange, becaue a hero of this movie is just like us... The plot is... impossible and idea of this film is impossible too... I say one thing - SEE IT!"
wypracowanko pisane jak na wiedzę z 2 klasy gimnazjum - ucze się... hmm... drugi rok :) bo zacząłem ang. w 1 klasie gim, ale znam dość dużo ang. z filmów i gier (a mówią, że komputer psuje i gry są złe)
z góry dzięki, że przeczytaliście ;)
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
kurde literówki przy przepisywaniu z zeszytu -
wgere=where
^Piotrek^ [ Toilet Tantalizer ]
All people in his living town are actors, but he doesn't know about it.
One day everything changes... He feel something weird...
great comedy and wonderful dramatic.
The plot is... impossible and the idea of this film is impossible too...
I can say only one thing - SEE IT - tak brzmi ciut lepiej.
tyle ja wyłapałem :)
^Piotrek^ [ Toilet Tantalizer ]
pfu, nie SEE IT tylko WATCH IT. tak już będzie dobrze na pewno :)
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
heh.. właśnie też pomyślałem o tym WATCH IT :) a reszte właśnie poprawiam :) wonderful to mam przez jedno f tylko mi się źle klawisz wcisnął i wyskoczyło 2 razy :)
Ścierwopluj [ Konsul ]
I don't want tell you... - I don't want to tell you...
yagienka [ pułapka na Misia ]
"Do you know how many cameras are mounted in your town, jeśli" in your town" to po co "where are you living?" nawet po polsku jest to zbędne, a napewno nie z inwersją
na pewno nie "humour" może mood albo How would you feel albo cos w tym stylu, czyli jakbyś się czuł, gdyby....
i może zamiast "nic o tym nie wiedział" dał byś i nie był byś tego swiadomy (aware)
good man ???? to też troszkę zgrzyta może po prostu "zwyczjny" (ordinary or simple)
"his living town" - to raczej nie jest poprawne może ...all people around him are ....
"alone"??? jestes pewien bo to znaczy samotnie
i nie "impossible" a raczej incredible or unbelievable
na przyszlość staraj się nie tłumaczyć żywcem tekstu z polskiego, tylko uzywać konstrukcji na temat filmów, recenzji, które miales na lekcji lub w podręczniku
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
heh... ok - poprawione... czyli ogólnie nie jest tak źle jak na drugą klase gim? :D
Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]
Jak na II kl gimnazjum jest REWELACYJNIE !!! (ale poprawiać jest co)
Let's think - how would you feel, if you was a TV hero and you didn't know anthing about it... Truman Burbank (actor - Jim Carrey) - good man with great family is the main character in "The Truman Show" - a TV show about him and his friends... All the people in his town are actors, but he doesn't know it. One day everything changes... He starts to feel something weard... I'm not going to tell you everything about this movie. You must see for yourself.
KARSTEN [ Centurion ]
oooo ku... oooooo ja pier.... ale zje.... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ż A R T O W A Ł E M ! ! ! ! ! !
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
ok - trochę dodałem i zmieniłem - możecie sprawdzić tą wersję?:
"Do you know how many cameras are mounted in your town, where are you living? Zero? Maybe 10 or 10 millions... Let's think - how would you feel, when you would be a TV hero and you don't know anything about it...
Truman Burbank (actor - Jim Carrey) - simple man with great family is a hero in "The Truman Show" - TV show about him and his friends... All people around him are actors, but he doesn't know about it. One day everything changes... He feels something weird and he must know true… He tried to find his beloved friend, but searching failed – director of this show stops it, cause he has got very big power – he can change names of peoples in order to harder searching. When Truman was a kid, his dad drowns in lake (of course it’s been planned, and he doesn’t really die). After that Truman scares water (deeps, seas, lakes etc.) and he can’t leave island where he live… In end of movie he goes to boat and he sails! The Director of Truman Show has been very nervous and created storm… Truman almost died… then he saw wall with clouds… That was the end of false city… Everybody must see it singly.
All in all - this film is... very unique. This is an action film, great comedy and wonderful dramatic. It's strange, because a hero of this movie is just like us... The plot is... unbelievable and the idea of this film is unbelievable too... I almost forgot – the music and sounds in this movie are INCREDIBLE! That’s all thanks Philip Glass – he makes almost every soundtrack to this movie. I can say only one thing – WATCH IT! (and HEAR IT! :) )"
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
little up, guyz :)
Coy2K [ Veteran ]
dlaczego mounted ? nie lepiej installed ?
"Do you know how many cameras are installed in your town, where you live? Zero? Maybe 10 or 10 millions... Let's think - how would you feel, if you were a TV hero and you wouldn't know anything about it...
Truman Burbank (actor - Jim Carrey) - a simple man with great family is a hero in "The Truman Show" - a TV show about him and his friends... All the people around him are actors, but he doesn't know about it. One day everything changes... He feels something's wrong and he must know the truth… He tried to find his beloved friend, but failed – director of this show stops it, cause he has very big power – he can change names of people in order to make searching more difficult. When Truman was a kid, his dad drowned in a lake (of course it’s been planned, and he didn't really die). After that Truman is afraid of water (deeps, seas, lakes etc.) and he can’t leave the island he's living on… In end of movie he goes to boat and he sails! The Director of Truman Show has become angry and created storm… Truman almost died… then he saw wall with clouds… That was the end of false city… Everybody must see it singly. <<< o co chodzi w tym zdaniu ?
All in all - this film is... very unique. This is an action movie, great comedy and wonderful drama. It's strange, because a hero of this movie is just like us... The plot is... unbelievable and the idea of this film is unbelievable too... I almost forgot – the music and sounds in this movie are INCREDIBLE! That’s all thanks to Philip Glass – he made almost every soundtrack to this movie. I can say only one thing – WATCH IT! (and HEAR IT! :) )"
Coy2K [ Veteran ]
acha...zamiast "zero" daj lepiej "none"
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
Coy2k - w tamtym zdaniu chodzi o to, żeby każdy sobie sam to obejrzał... :P
Coy2K [ Veteran ]
Everyone must see it by himself
Pvt. Creak [ Criav ]
ok wielkie dzięki :) troche kuleje u mnie ten ang. (tzn. jestem jeszcze młody, ale wolałbym robić to lepiej) i musze się podszkolić ;)
Sir klesk [ Sazillon ]
"what's would be your humour,"
Pwinno byc what... chyba... bez 's
Sir klesk [ Sazillon ]
albo napisac:
How would you feel?