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Prośba do znających dobrze angielski!!!!! w miare pilne:)

18.01.2004
17:41
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Didier z Rivii [ life 4 sound ]

Prośba do znających dobrze angielski!!!!! w miare pilne:)

Mam wielka prosbe dla osob znajacych dobrze jezyk angileski o wynaleznienie bardzoej i mniej razacych bledow w krotkim wypracowanku. dla ulatwienia wskazywania bledow ponumerowalem poszczegolne zdania. z gory dziekuje za pomoc.

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Recomendation of film.

1.I like different kinds of films, but always, one of my favorite film’s sort are science-fiction films.
2.In this kind of films we can see very interesting visions of future.
3.But not all scienece-fiction’s films are as good as others.
4.My favorites are “Blade Runner”, “Mad Max”, “Johnny Mnemonic”, the first “Matrix” and “Avalon”.
5.And I would like to tell you about last of them.
6.At start I tell something about “Avalon’s” plot.
7.This film tells about future world, where young people plays very addicting battle simulation game called Avalon.
8.When Ash, a star player, hears of rumors about more advanced livel of the game excist somewhere, she joins to group of explorers who want to find the gateway to the next level.
9.They only know that they must defeat somebody called ghost.
10.First all seems to be straight and clear, but from some point spectacors don’t know is it true that Avalon’s world is only a game, and Ash’s world is real world.
11.“Avalon” was directed by great japanease filmmaker - Mamoru Oshii, and maked in Poland in polish language.
12.Mamoru Oshii is one of the best science-fiction films directors.
13.Erlier he had maked anime called “Ghost in the Shell”, and Wachowski’s brothers “The Matrix” was based on this anime.
14.But back to “Avalon”.
15.All characters in this film are played by polish actors and actresses.
16.Main female character – Ash, was played by Małgorzata Foremniak.
17.Mamoru Oshii has planed to make this film for 14 years, but earlier the technology wasn’t as god as it is now.
18.Shoots was maked in Milanówek near Wrocław in two months.
19.Filmmakers used a few tanks and original Mi24 Hind D helicopter.
20.This was first use of this kind of helicopter in cinematography. Even in “Rambo III” there was only a dummy of Mi24.
21.“Avalon” crew hired a lot of mutes. But really work started when “Avalon” crew had come back Japan.
22.Postproduction taked 90% time of makeing this film.
23.Mamoru Oshii corrected manually every frame.
24.He had wanted that “Avalon” was the same like in his head.
25.He corrected even shadows on characters’ faces, and moments of eyeblinks.
26.While watching this movie you get a feeling of a very unique quality.
27.It was filmed colours of sepia, but still with the high-resolution of today's film standard.
28.This adds a very depressive visual style to much of the movie.
29.Another effective element to the film is the excellent music recorded by the Warsaw Philharmonic Orchestra under Kenji Kawai supervision.
30.It ranges through many different forms, from electro music even to orchestral.
31.Another interesting thing about this movie is that “Alavon” was played in cinemas all over the world in polish language with subtitles.
32.Mamoru Oshii forbided to make dubbing to “Avalon”.
33.He said that polish language was the best to his vision of “Avalon”.
34.The class of this film was confirmed by James Cameron, director of “Alien” and “The Terminator”. He said that “Avalon” was the most artistic, beautyful and stylish science-fiction film that he had ever seen.
35.I hope, that this a fer information about “Avalon” encourage you to watch this great film.

18.01.2004
17:59
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Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]

PRZEDIMKI !!! (A, THE)

18.01.2004
18:04
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stanson [ 3 ]

2. In those kind of films we can see very interesting visions of future
3. But not all scienece-fictions films are as good as others
6. At the start I'll tell something about “Avalon’s” plot.
7. This film tells about future world, where young people play very addicting battle simulation game called Avalon.
10. First all seems to be straight and clear, but from some point spectacors don’t know if it's true that Avalon’s world is only a game, and Ash’s world is real world
11. “Avalon” was directed by great japaneese filmmaker - Mamoru Oshii, and maked in Poland in polish language.
13. Erlier he maked anime called “Ghost in the Shell”, and Wachowski’s brothers “The Matrix” was based on this anime.

Wiecej mi sie nie chce czytac, poza tym nie gwarantuje, ze poprawilem dobrze --> mialem troche przerwy w ang ostatnio...

18.01.2004
18:05
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Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]

7.This film tells about a future world, where young people play very addicting battle simulation game called Avalon

18.01.2004
18:07
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Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]

8.When Ash, a star player, hears rumors about more advanced level of the game that excist somewhere,so she joins a group of explorers who want to find the gateway to the next level.

18.01.2004
18:09
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Cainoor [ Mów mi wuju ]

1.I like different kinds of films, but still, one of my favorite category is science-fiction.

18.01.2004
18:13
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Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]

13.Erlier he had made an anime called “Ghost in the Shell”, and Wachowski brothers' “The Matrix” was based on this anime.

18.01.2004
18:13
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volvo95 [ Legend ]

Tu jest wpizdu błędów , nie chce mi sie wypisywać :(

1 favorite --> favourite
22 makeing --> making

18.01.2004
18:24
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Misio-Jedi [ Legend ]

17.Mamoru Oshii had been planeing to make this film for 14 years, but earlier the technology wasn’t as god as it is now.
19.The filmmakers used a few tanks and original Mi24 Hind D helicopter.
20.This was the first use of this kind of helicopter in cinematography. Even in “Rambo III” there was only a dummy of Mi24.
22.Postproduction took 90% time of makeing this film.
24.He wanted “Avalon” the same like in his head.
27.It was filmed in colours of sepia, but still with the high-resolution of today's film standard.



18.01.2004
21:58
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Didier z Rivii [ life 4 sound ]

Misio-Jedi dzieki za pomoc.
volvo95-> wiem ze jest wpizdu bledow, ale zapomnialem dodac, ze mi chodzilo o poprawienie bledow gramatycznych a nie literowek, bo literowki to poprawie sam bez problemu.

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