Prośba o sprawdzenie

04.06.2008

18:29

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polak111 [ LOXXII ]

Prośba o sprawdzenie

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie listu w języku angielskim :)

Hi Rafał
I’m writing this email from Greece. The weather is really hot and sunny. I and my parents leave in the Hotel Olimp. We have got 30 meters to the Aegean Sea. This is really good because we can refrigerate our bodies in one. We everyday sun – bathe on the beach. I have burned some my skin.
Greeks are very nice and warm. They cook very good Grecian dishes.
Two days ago, we went to the Greece’s capital. Her name is Athens. We visited amphitheatres, Acropol and Partenon. After that, we have bought some suvenires.
Yesterday, we were on the most beautiful Greek island, Skiathos. We sailed somewhere two hours.(dlugo, ale było warto). We visited nice city. We ate good dinner and went to the beach. Sand was very, very hot. We couldn’t go barefoot. Sea was crystal - clear. We swam in water for one hour. Next, we came back to our hotel.
Tomorrow, I going to return to Poland. In Greece is beautiful country. I wanna to come back there at one time.

Robert
P.S.
We’ll meet after vacations ;)

04.06.2008

18:32

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tomecki91 [ Konsul ]

I and my parents leave in the Hotel Olimp. - Me and my parrents have been stayed in the Hotel Olimp. albo Me and my parrents have been left in the Hotel Olimp.

04.06.2008

18:33

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Tomcio_666 [ Płatki Addicted ]

I’m writing this email from Greece. The weather is really hot and sunny. Me and my parents have been stayed in the Olimp Hotel. We have got 30 meters to the Aegean Sea. It's really good because we can refrigerate our bodies in one. We are taking sunbath on the beach everyday. I have burned some of my skin.
Greeks are very nice and warm.(może kind - mili - bo mi tu warm nie pasuje) They cook very good Grecian dishes.
Two days ago, we went to the Greece’s capital - Athens. We have visited amphitheatres, Acropol and Partenon. After that, we have bought some souvenires.
Yesterday, we were on the most beautiful Greek island, Skiathos. We sailed there for about two hours.(dlugo, ale było warto). We visited nice city. We ate good dinner and went to the beach. Sand was very, very hot. We couldn’t go barefoot. Sea was crystal - clear. We swam in water for one hour. Next, we came back to our hotel.
Tomorrow, I going to return to Poland. In Greece is beautiful country. I wanna to come back there at one time.

We’ll meet when the holidays ends ;)

04.06.2008

18:44

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Mat3iz [ Konsul ]

Wszedzie uzywasz polite form, a pozniej walisz to "wanna" na koncu :P zmien to na "want to", a najlepiej cale zdanie na "Someday I would like to come back to Greece".

Greek people are very nice and pleasant.
Greece is a beautiful country.
The weather here is really hot and sunny.
Two days ago, we went to the capital of greece - athens.
They make very delicious greek food.
We sailed for about two hours. Long, but it was worth it.
Afterwards, we came back to our hotel.
Tomorrow, I will go back to Poland.

04.06.2008

18:45

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Tomcio_666 [ Płatki Addicted ]

I will return to Poland soon. Greece is a beautiful country. I want to come there once again.

Poprzednio troche sie pospieszyłem ^^

Wanna naprawde mnie rozbiło, padłem na cycki :), że też nie zauważyłem tego wcześniej :D

04.06.2008

18:56

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Bullzeye_NEO [ Happy Camper ]

Jakoś bardziej mi tam pasuje preposition "at" zamiast "in".

We visited a nice city. After that, we ate good dinner and went to the beach. Sand was extremely hot. We couldn’t walk barefoot. Sea was clear as a crystal. We swam in the water for about an hour. Then, we came back to our hotel.

Zaznaczam, że z angielską gramatyką styczności nie miałem przez jakiś czas, więc jakiś babol może być.