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Kuper^^ [ Konsul ]
moze mi ktos sprawdzic bledy ?
no wiec mam wypowiedz napsiac i chcialbym aby ktos mi sprawdzil bledy gramatyczne :)
Money can't buy happiness
Nowadays all people thinks that if they have money , they can buy everything. They think that money can solve all of their problems. But they are wrong !
You can’t buy the most important things like love or friendship. If you think that if you have a lot of money , your “friends “ are real , you live in big mistake. They are no friends of you , they are friends of your money. This fake-friends are always when someone has money , but when the money end’s up , they are no longer a friend. You can’t force anybody to love you , because you have a lot money. You also can’t buy a good health , even the richest man in the world can’t buy a cure for cancer or aids. Even if you have everything but you don’t have someone to share with , you won’t feel happy. Sure that You can buy a new big tv or travel everywhere , but you will still feel that something is missing , something important , that thing will be someone who likes you , or loves you .
To sum up. You can’t buy happiness because you can’t buy the most valuable things. You can have everything but you will feel incomplete because you won’t have someone who loves you and want to be with you not because of your money , but because of you .
PaWeLoS [ Admiral ]
Nie znam angielskiego perfect, ale postaram się troszeczkę pomóc :)
"Money can't buy happiness" - Pieniądze nie kupią szczęścia?
"you live in big mistake" - Polonizm. Nie możesz tak napisać po angielsku :)
"when the money end’s up" Pieniądze są niepoliczalne, więc na pewno będzie będzie bez końcówki "s". Chyba, że to jakiś skrót, co sugeruje apostrof, ale nie wydaje mi się.
"a lot money" - "a lot of money"
"Even if you have everything but you don’t have someone to share with , you won’t feel happy. Sure that You can buy a new big tv or travel everywhere , but you will still feel that something is missing , something important , that thing will be someone who likes you , or loves you ."
To co podkreśliłem zmień na "will be able".
A ostatni akapit to wg mnie jakiś bełkot :) Zrób z tego więcej zdań.