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Yo5H [ spammajster ]
writing na angielski - sprawdzcie bledy plx ;p
Yesterday I had a very lucky day. For first, I woke up and stand up with left leg. Then, I went to school and I got 1 mark from one of the best subjects for me – PE, Information and English. By the way: on PE I broke my left hand. After lessons I realised that someone stole my discman in school. When I was returning to home, an evil pigeon shooted me two times.
During the dinner I choked by the mashed potatoes. Then I turned on my computer. While I was playing, I heard loud “BOOM!” behind my window. I looked there, and guess what? A large, black piano crashed up on my car. But there was one more evul thing – I died in game ;(. I was near suicide. At last, in the evening Polish football representation losed 0:11 in match with Azerbejdżan. As I said, it was one of the luckiest day in my life.
jesli ktos ma chwile i znajdzie jakies bledy to bede dzwieczny :)
Yo5H [ spammajster ]
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@d@m [ ]
Informatyka - information technology
Co to jest PE?
After lessons I realised that someone has stolen my discman. When I was returning home, an evil pigeon shooted (? co miales na mysli piszac shooted?) me twice. (zasadniczo: jeden raz - once, dwa razy twice, trzy razy - three times etc). But there was one worsel thing – I was killed in game. At last, in the evening Polish football representation lost 0:11 in match with Azerbaijan.
bartek [ ]
@d@m:
halski88 [ Ciasteczkowy Potwór ]
a on nie za krótki ? U mnie za niego byłoby max 3...
Yo5H [ spammajster ]
pe = physical education (w-f)
tekst ma byc w past simple wiec nie wiem czy to co mi poprawiles (After lessons I realised that someone has stolen my discman) jest w tym czasie?
wracajac do domu golab nasral na mnie 2 razy :-D
uiouio1 [ Pretorianin ]
informatyka - computer science lepiej
PE - physical education
duzo bledow ale zalezy na jakim poziomie sie uczysz to Ci moge poprawic
@d@m [ ]
Bartek ---> Dzieki, dobrze wiedziec.
Yosh ---> PS? To faktycznie has stolen tam nie pasuje :)
Firstly, I woke up and stand up with left leg. Then, I went to school and I got 1 in (tu nie jestem pewien, ale na pewno nie ma czegos takiego jak from (w przypadku ocen)) one of the best subjects for me... Piszesz, ze dostales jeden z jednego z najlepszych przedmitow dla Ciebie, a potem wymieniasz 3, wiec jak to w koncu jest?
Co do golebia, to Ci nie pomoge :)
Yo5H [ spammajster ]
chcialem napisac, ze dostalem 1 z jednych z najlatwiejszych dla mnie przedmiotow ;P
ps. jesli cos poprawiaci to tylko na past simple!
Novus [ Generaďż˝ ]
For first, I woke up and stand up with left leg <- nie for first, tylko first. Nie ma "to stand up with left leg", poszuka rownowaznego idiomu bo to jest bez sensu.
Then, I went to school and I got 1 mark from one of the best subjects for me – PE, Information and English <- piszesz from one(zle(chyba powinno byc get a 1 in subject)) a wymieniasz trzy.
During the dinner I choked by the mashed potatoes. Then I turned on my computer <- te dwa zdania maja jakis zwiazek? :) i powinno byc i turned my computer on
But there was one more evul thing – I died in game <- tu nie bedzie evil tylko bad, sad, terrible itp
I was near suicide <- i was close to commit suicide
football representation losed 0:11 losed ->lost!
jeszcze paru rzeczy nie jestem pewien wiec nie pisze
Novus [ Generaďż˝ ]
hcialem napisac, ze dostalem 1 z jednych z najlatwiejszych dla mnie przedmiotow to bardziej "in some of teh easiest subjects"
@d@m [ ]
Novus ---> Czesc z tego co wyminiles napisalem juz w poprzednich postach :)
martino_1 [ Pretorianin ]
Yesterday I had a very unlucky day. I woke up and got up with my left leg. Then, I went to school and I got 1 mark from one of the best subjects for me – PE (, Information and English.) tego nie wpisuj By the way, on PE I broke my left hand. After my lessons I realized that someone stole my discman in school. On my return home, an evil pigeon (shooted) strzelala do ciebie??? me two times.
During dinner, I choked by the mashed potatoes. Then I turned on my computer. While I was playing, I heard loud “BOOM!” behind my window. I looked there, and guess what? A large, black piano crashed on top of my car. But there was one more evil thing – I died in game ;(. I was near suicide. Lastly, in the evening Polish football representation losed 0:11 in match with Azerbejdżan. As I said, it was one of the luckiest day in my life.
Novus [ Generaďż˝ ]
@d@m - nie czytalem, zawsze to lepiej jak dwie osoby niezaleznie sie wypowiedza, bo pewniejsza informacja:)
Yo5H [ spammajster ]
dobra, dzieki Wam moze zdam ;)